Interesting and atmospheric. Some of the text is a little tricky to read with the backgrounds, and the links half way through the paragraphs are a bit disorientating, but on the whole it's a good first chapter! Glad I can just use the Harlowe 'back' button to undo any bad choices too.
I know what you mean there... I've given up on background images myself, because I could never get the balance right (or make the image scale how I wanted it to...) I like the duality of the two colours, but be careful mixing your 'link' font too much. I had to mouse-over a few places to see if it was a link or font colours.
That said, I'm actually really curious how far this can go! This dark retelling of a familiar tale has a marvellous atmosphere!
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I always adore twisted fairy tales , I cant wait to see more!
Interesting and atmospheric. Some of the text is a little tricky to read with the backgrounds, and the links half way through the paragraphs are a bit disorientating, but on the whole it's a good first chapter! Glad I can just use the Harlowe 'back' button to undo any bad choices too.
Keep up the good work and best of luck!
Thank you Zededd for your time and thoughtful comments. It's my first try at mixing text and images, lots to learn. Much appreciation!
I know what you mean there... I've given up on background images myself, because I could never get the balance right (or make the image scale how I wanted it to...) I like the duality of the two colours, but be careful mixing your 'link' font too much. I had to mouse-over a few places to see if it was a link or font colours.
That said, I'm actually really curious how far this can go! This dark retelling of a familiar tale has a marvellous atmosphere!